Jack and Bobby.

we were learning to write very good stories.
Jack and bobby.One night when it was cold and dark there was a boy called Jack he went camping for two nights.  He set up his tent right next to the river the river was very noisy because the water was crashing on the shore.  
Then Jack set up a fire with some sticks and leafs.  He started to toast his marshmallows.  A monster called Bobby just appeared right behind jack bobby could smell the marshmallows and that’s why he came to Jack.  When Jack sure bobby he screamed and put the stick in front of hem.  Bobby saw the marshmallow so he snached it of Jack with his tounge.  Bobby stepped back a little bit and rolled over to the left hand side and Jack threw the marshmallow in his mouth.  After he threw that marshmellow he got one more marshmallow out of the bag and Bobby nearly bit Jack’s hand  off! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! eeeii Jack said because his hand nearly got bitten off and he fell down onto  the ground. Then when Jack got up bobby pulled the tongue then he got angry ererer bobby said because he was angry. Jack began to run away to his tent it was about five meters away. He full over beside his tent there was a white cushion shaped like a marshmallow.  Jack got the cushion and stored up befor bobby got to hem.  Then bobby got to jack. Jack got the white polow and pot it in front of hem bobby day dreamed a little bit about the pillow that looked like a marshmallow.  After that jack through the pillow behind him bobby chased the polow because he loves mush mols and when bobby was gone jack ran away as fast as he could Screaming.  Bobby came back to the fire and pot the polow on the stikic the polow just disappeared.  Bobby was very sad after that. The end.

  Next time i'm going to do some more words.